FIRST THE MOVE REA WATCH THIS FIRST OR U WONT UNDERSTAND FANFIC IT EXPLANS ALL ORIGINAL CHARACTURS!
it was a warm day in legolandville. but not THAT warm day LOL. stevnesnon wolk up in his bed (not the floor ). the phone rang: STEVNSON WE NEED UR HELP AN ASTROD HIT EARTH IN TEN MINUTS. so stevnson jumped out o bed BUT THEN
stevneons litle brother wlked up . HI STEV CAN U READ THE STORY I ROTE FOR U. now stevenssons litel broteh ALWAYS rote BAD BAD BD stores. but stevensen deceded to reed it anyways. and her is what it sed;
FRKIN PRODUCT PLACMENT BRO I TOLD YOU NOT 2 DO TATH NO MORE THIS IS COMPLET RUBISH strevnson yelled . then he reaised that if he didnt hurry the everybody woud dye from th astrod. so he hurried and jumpde in2 his car and vrooooooomed of.
The sunset, once a beacon of hope for a new day, now represented nothing but death. As I gazed over the flaming remains of the planet that I once called home, I was reminded that time was not on my side as it had once been. I turned to board the evacuation starship sent to rescue those of us who had waited one day too long, and reluctantly climbed the steep slope to the launch platform.
As I entered the passenger quarters, I tried to ease my mind by thinking of what was ahead of me in my new life. No longer tied down by the castes of the previous society, I reminded myself that I could finally pursue my most treasured dreams uninhibited. Still, the attachment to my previous home pulsed stronger, and the memories tugged at my heart much like a five dollar footlong-
STEVNSON THNK GOODNS YOUR HEAR yelld the guy at the spess port. but wait i forgot r u old enoug to fly shutle ? YES sad stevnsoon, im 13 now. so they went into spess.
I SE THE ASTRIOD yelld robo I DO TO yelld the other guy. WE MUST CHAS IT so they did. but it hid . IN AN ASTOID FELD! so stenson flew RITE IN!!! but robo had a sad and sed 'sir the posibilitty of navigtaing an adstroid field is aprox. 1,000000000,00,,00 to 1. NER TEL ME THE ODS U STUPID ROBOT but sir well DYE oh crud man
so they turned aroud and went 2 earth agin
they all dieded.
sowhat do u think guys?? i spent ALL DAY sory i wont improve it its perfct alredy